Greetings and Salutations!

Alright. Not only is hell now frozen to the core, but heavan[or whatever you beleive in], has gotten a bit toasty. I updated my story, and now I just want to know what people think... So, for all 8 of you who are watching me, let me know! I'd like to know if I should continue to continue on, since the last time I asked, I only got 2 responces...


Anyway, should you have not read the comment or not even seen the post yet, I will inform you that the characters may sound familiar because I ment for them to! Not only have I based many things off my, and the people around me's life, but I have taken many things from the t.v, internet, books I've read, and other sorces due to the fact that my imagination consists of nothing but snake people, video games... and... the part of the brain that is suposed to control sleeping habbits, which I have little of... Any-who, I've already had 6 people ask about that, and I want the story to be conectable... not like legos... all though that would be kinda cool...

But I digress. hm.. Digress... such a fun word ^^,
I would just really appreciate people telling me what they thought of the second chapter...


OH!! IF YOU HAVE NOT YET READ THE FIRST CHAPTER, GO AHEAD AND READ THAT FIRST!!! THE SECOND CHAPTER PROBEBLY WON'T MAKE SCENCE!! [this includes those whom I said could not read it, for I was just a bit embarassed due to the grammer and spelling mistakes, which hopefully are all fixed now!]



Sooo... now that I have completly wasted your time, you may go... except you! You shall bring me a smoothy!! ... oh, I hate smoothies... so, ugh... nevermind! you are free to go!